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janmew
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0 posted 2003-01-03 10:23 PM


Beware the lady who spins a net of dreams,
snatched like flies from the night air,
and dangles them like talismans
before weary, sleepless souls.

Clothed in all the wishes, and hopes,
covertly stolen from the careless
who hang them freely on their sleeves,
her dress sways like gossamer in the breeze.

Dainty and enchanting, in her finery,
bejeweled with desires robbed from the unwary
this feathered nymph of thievery
dances through the moonlight to the edge of day.


© Copyright 2003 Jan - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-01-04 12:33 PM


You must have had as sleepless a night as I did last night.  This is beautiful.  Joyce
jjote
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2 posted 2003-01-04 01:45 AM


This is as enchanting as a fairy tale.
janmew
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3 posted 2003-01-04 07:51 AM


Joyce, she does strike a lot at times, doesn't she.

jjote, thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed the wimsy of this piece.

Jan

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Member Patricius
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4 posted 2003-01-04 02:00 PM


Clothed in all the wishes, and hopes,
covertly stolen from the careless
who hang them freely on their sleeves,

Wonderfully written piece. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

SPIRIT
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5 posted 2003-01-04 06:32 PM


This is just beautiful.

I am an enigma, even unto myself.
A puzzle unsolved, a mystery maybe until beyond death.  ©das


janmew
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6 posted 2003-01-04 10:49 PM


Chris; Spirit... thanks, I'm glad you liked this piece.

Jan

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