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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-01-01 11:14 PM

Silently,
  Tip-toe by my pillows at night...
A year end,
  A new cycle start again...
Padding this endless wheels...
  On this bike of my fragile soul
Seeking directions
  And roads to aviod back alleys...
This travel...
  Should only end with...
         Meeting You...

On the roads...
  I meet many cycle starts and end...
Little butterfly...
  From an ugly face
         To a beautiful princess...
A hopeless song...
  By a mother
         To a joyful shout
                From a child's cried...
A solitude dance...
  From snowfakes...
         To a duet
                From the wind...
A cruel paws...
  Of a hawk...
         To a tender feed
                To her youngs...

Life is about padding...
  In this cycles of chains...
Obligations...
  Regrets...
     Joys...and crieds...

Silently,
  Tip-toe by my pillows at night...
A year end,
  A new cycle start again...
Padding this endless wheels...
  On this bike of my fragile soul
Seeking directions
  And roads for aviod back alleys...
This travel...
  Should only end with...
         Meeting You...

Until then...
  There is no joy...
And we are... as always...learning
  From nature...

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (01-02-2003 03:19 PM).]

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

1 posted 2003-01-02 12:10 PM

Beautifully written

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

2 posted 2003-01-02 03:26 PM

hi Daniel, thanks to be 1st one to reply

Glad that you like the poem.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

3 posted 2003-01-02 09:23 PM

I really like this, a nice read indeed.

Gentle breezes,
Wafting through my consciousness.
A pleasant awakening,
Reminding me of the contentment's
Of my life. ©spirit

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2003-01-02 09:30 PM

Yetr another lovely, thoughtful poem, Eliza. Joyce

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

5 posted 2003-01-02 09:42 PM

oh my works are little compare to poets and poetness here. :

:

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

6 posted 2003-01-03 01:11 PM

Life sometimes is like nature, ever changing, where nothing stays the same.
Like fresh spring flowers, I wish for you new and wonderful things to grow within your soul.

Sincerely,
Deb

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

7 posted 2003-01-04 06:52 PM

Eliza: I enjoyed your poem and it's true we do learn so much from nature. Nice thought processes here.

Betty Lou Hebert

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