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sharing myself... |
nEfaRius New Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 5sweden |
hey you guys, im new here, so before i write down my poems, just wanted to say, please do criticize me, good ore bad dont matter, thanx =) *** The way the sun lights up ur darkes side makes me quiver It doesnt matter how cold you are i still see something alive inside of you.. *** You smiled and in the moonlight u were special Goodbye, i said and i laughed at you you just jumped into desolation Im sorry, i whispered tears running down my cheeks I learned that sorry isnt enough sometimes |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Yay, I get to be the first to reply. ^_^ Welcome to Passions! And may I say those are very intriguing poems you have there. Have you thought about titles? The first is my favourite I think. Seeing good in the dark.. Well done -Lynne It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Welcome to Passion! Eliza Simmons |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
WELCOME TO OUR FAMILY nEfaRius!! That was an astounding first, keep it up! Lots of Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hard lesson to learn...you're right. Welcome to Passions. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Welcome to Passions. I must agree that sorry is often not good enough and sometimes comes way too late. Juls |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done...and a big Welcome to Passions! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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nEfaRius New Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 5sweden |
*happy* thanx ya all, your really great =) ...ill be comin with more work soon... |
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