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scorpio
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0 posted 2002-12-15 09:53 PM


Night shore

Along the water's edge
rippling waves chasing our toes
Laughs on soft breezes.

believe in what your heart feels...

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-12-15 10:44 PM


Very beautiful write Scorpio.
This reminds me of a time...this past summer.
Or perhaps a time to come...somewhere in time.
Wonderful imagery...much enjoyed.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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2 posted 2002-12-16 08:05 AM


Enchantress, I'm glad this spoke to you...it was drawn from a time not long ago ...and  will be repeated very soon..

believe in what your heart feels...

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3 posted 2002-12-16 06:47 PM


scorpio:  i really like this.  Brings back many happy memories of walking in the surf at the Oregon Coast.

Betty Lou Hebert

scorpio
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4 posted 2002-12-16 08:42 PM


Thank you, Betty Lou...glad to bring memories..
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5 posted 2002-12-16 11:30 PM


Scorpio, this was so peaceful, I could feel those waves sweeping across my feet. Really beautiful.
Hugs,
Juls

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6 posted 2002-12-18 02:54 AM


Dear scorpio,

I like your peaceful shore. I used to turn to the sea for solace whenever I'm down and they always seem choppy and angry! And now I can visualise the serene beauty you've portrayed. Thanks!

Many Smiles
Michelle

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7 posted 2002-12-18 04:40 AM


reminds me of a night I had
scorpio
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8 posted 2002-12-18 08:29 AM


Juliet...the soothing caress of the water is peaceful....thank you..


Michelle...your warm words are much appreciated..


Memories are wonderful treasures...thank you Passing Shadows..

believe in what your heart feels...

vlraynes
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9 posted 2002-12-29 05:43 PM



scorpio~
I love the thought and the 'feel' of this.
So beautifully said.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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10 posted 2006-01-08 12:35 PM


Beautiful Haiku/Senruy Scorp (BTW Im a pisces)... E1


scorpio
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11 posted 2006-01-08 01:01 PM


I'm very glad you liked this.  Thank you.

believe in what your heart feels...

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12 posted 2006-01-09 09:05 AM


what peace this brings and will be looking forward to walking in the waters of this ocean before too much longer.
Annie

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scorpio
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13 posted 2006-01-09 11:48 AM


Thank you Annie.  I hope you get to enjoy walks along the ocean shore very soon.

believe in what your heart feels...

midnightblues
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14 posted 2006-01-10 09:35 AM


Now that I read it again, brings back fond memories. It's an altogether out of the world experience: your magical shore

Love
MiCheLLe

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scorpio
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15 posted 2006-01-10 12:31 PM


Michelle I'm glad the magic of the shore resonated with you.  Thank you.

believe in what your heart feels...

Klassy Lassy
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16 posted 2006-02-19 01:12 AM


This feels like summer and sunshine, which seems like a fantasy to me at the moment, as mid February finds me here huddled in a blanket reading poetry!   Enticing imagery!


~ Karen ~

scorpio
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17 posted 2006-02-19 09:49 AM


Thank you for your kind comments.  Winter winds are howling today. Thoughts of summer will provide warmth.

believe in what your heart feels...

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18 posted 2006-02-19 10:52 AM


Scorpio~
Oh .. I love this ... so glad to see it come 'round again~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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scorpio
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19 posted 2006-02-19 12:10 PM


Thank you for your support Marge. Much appreciated.

believe in what your heart feels...

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