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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-12-11 02:20 PM


Greeting from yonder peak
Of mountains comes the singing voice
Of a friend.

Among valleys, the voice reflects
As the morning bell of the
Beautiful dawn.

Beautiful dawn-
Where the morn star till
Up high is
Where our eyes meet
And greet each other.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-12 04:48 PM


Vivian:  I loved this!  It has a magical quality and a mysterious aura!

Betty Lou Hebert

aries_luv_ppl
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2 posted 2002-12-12 05:30 PM


thanks. thanks for the 1st to reply. glad that u love it

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

vlraynes
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3 posted 2002-12-29 03:35 PM



Vivian~
This is lovely.
I very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

aries_luv_ppl
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4 posted 2002-12-29 03:37 PM


thanks Vicky Happy New Year!

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

SPIRIT
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5 posted 2003-01-01 02:34 PM


This is a very pleasant read indeed.
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6 posted 2003-01-01 04:20 PM


Nice verse on the first day of the new year.  Love, Joyce
Daniel J D
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7 posted 2003-01-02 12:16 PM


What a good read.

"Among valleys, the voice reflects
As the morning bell of the
Beautiful dawn."

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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