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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2002-12-11 01:30 AM



Memories

Memories I treasure, dancing in the rain of,
Memories I remember, walking amid grasses on,
Memories I cherish, holding your hands in,
Memories I have, of your warmth and,
Memories I had, you as my father for,
Memories I will regain until,
Memories in heaven

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2002 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2002-12-11 05:48 AM


Oohh Daniel,

this is so inspiring! I used to be very close with my dad til my teenage years and that left me with bad memories. I guess its time to let go and to let the good memories come back. Thanks my friend, you did it for me

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
2 posted 2002-12-11 11:03 AM


Daniel, I had to read this over and over again. The beauty was just too much to take in with only one read. You really touched my heart.
Juliet

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3 posted 2002-12-13 03:38 PM


Danny boy, I've never seen such beautiful dangling participles.  Joyce
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