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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-12-09 04:08 PM



Snow Covered Land
~*~

The snow covered land
is rich as a wedding cake
and purely divine


BloomingRose



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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-12-09 07:02 PM


A lovely comparison.  Joyce
Lonestar
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2 posted 2002-12-09 07:06 PM


Agree with joyce, a good comparison, and it does make you think

Lonestar

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3 posted 2002-12-10 12:01 PM


BloomingRose~
How delicious~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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midnightblues
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4 posted 2002-12-11 05:32 AM


Mmm any imagery that's food is definitely fine by me! How delightful!

Lots of Love
Michelle

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BloomingRose
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5 posted 2002-12-11 07:21 AM


When I get a chance to travel and see fresh fallen snow, I can't help but think of a white wedding cake in all it's purity.
Thanks for reading.
Deb

juliet_2u
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6 posted 2002-12-11 10:59 AM


I have to agree with Marge, delicious indeed.
Hugs,
Juls

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7 posted 2002-12-12 04:45 PM


Deb:  Fresh fallen snow always makes me think of whipped cream!  to go with your wedding cake!  Loved the poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2002-12-29 03:33 PM



Deb~
I really love the imagery of this.
Beautifully done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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