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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2002-12-09 12:27 PM



Hold the Tears

Gather the pain in your heart
When the healing tears you apart
Let each tear fall in your palms

When you have filled the cup of your hands
Wash away the heartache then open your eyes
You will find a rainbow made of butterflies

At each end there will be an angel singing
In the middle there will be a river meandering
Step in feel the gentleness of water running

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2002 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-12-09 02:06 AM


Perfectly pretty poetry.  Joyce
cherrylips
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2 posted 2002-12-09 04:39 AM


Beautiful Daniel. Now I won't always look at tears as a bad thing , dx
aries_luv_ppl
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3 posted 2002-12-09 06:35 PM


beautiful

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

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4 posted 2002-12-10 11:56 PM


Daniel:  This is really lovely and I enjoyed reading it.

Betty Lou Hebert

juliet_2u
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5 posted 2002-12-11 01:02 PM


Daniel, I pray that the many cups of tears I have cried will wash away my hearts ache and that I will find that rainbow you speak of. How tender were your words.
Thanks for sharing,
Juls

cmslaton
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6 posted 2002-12-12 12:12 PM


beautiful poem
Sunshine
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7 posted 2002-12-12 11:17 AM


Daniel, this caught my eye, because of the time and date...the last comment was on 12/12 at 12:12...

I figured this had a meaning for me.

It does.

Thank you!

vlraynes
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8 posted 2002-12-29 03:30 PM



Daniel~
This is just beautiful, my friend.
Very nicely penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

visitvenus
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9 posted 2002-12-30 12:46 PM


This is wonderful...gives me something constructive to do with my tears.

Thank you.

LADY_DEATH
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10 posted 2002-12-30 01:26 PM


Good thing my eyes were already wet from crying, because this poem made me cry more.it touched that special place in my heart!It was so beautiful!


Daniel J D
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11 posted 2003-01-02 12:01 PM


Thank you for all the replies. My warm wishes goes out to you all.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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12 posted 2004-09-14 01:38 PM


needed this today
Broken_Winged_Angel
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13 posted 2004-11-03 08:45 AM


Perhaps tears aren't so bad after all...

Thank you very much for sharing this with everyone.

BWA

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