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cherrylips
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since 2002-11-30
Posts 51
UK

0 posted 2002-12-04 01:32 PM



It's easier to sit and cry,
Than to ever stop and wonder why.

Is there a reason for this pain?
What could it ever lead me to gain?

I sit and ponder here alone,
Allowing my thoughts to freely roam.

With hurt and doubt eating at my soul,
I wonder if I will ever feel whole.
This emptiness from deep inside,
Rapidly swallows me alive.

A special person I do lack,
Someone to help bring my back.

I have nothing to offer you,
I sit here lonesome and feeling blue.
I have no talent, I have no looks.
I'm not intelligent and I can not cook.

I hate myself oh so much,
No wonder no one can bear my touch.

I leave you now to live your life,
I hope you will find a husband of wife
And as for me,
Alone I must simply be.

© Copyright 2002 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
Lonestar
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since 2002-12-04
Posts 35
Glasgow, Scotland
1 posted 2002-12-04 02:30 PM


deep poem there, but i for one believe that no matter what, you'll never be alone, and you will never be alone, no matter how down in the dumps you maybe.

Smile..you never know who's admiring it.

Lonestar

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since 1999-11-06
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2 posted 2002-12-04 06:37 PM


CherryLips~
Welcome to Passions and this is a sort of sad little ditty, but I have to differ with you when you say ...

'I have no talent'

Indeed, you do have a talent for writing it out~
Not everyone can say that~
Use your poetic word-power to purge your feelings and then reach out to others with heart-felt thoughts .... you'll be so busy, you won't have time to feel Lonesome~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
3 posted 2002-12-05 02:42 PM


Dear cherrylips,

I do agree with Marge, you've got talent really and its amazing the way you pen your thoughts. This is great. Keep going

love
michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

jjote
Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2003-01-03 11:35 AM


Hey girl, you can cry on my shoulder. A good cry is what one needs sometimes. Like the rain, it makes the grasses grow, and for humans like us, it's what makes life bittersweet.

Keep writing.

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind
5 posted 2003-01-03 03:17 PM


hey what say you that you have no talent?

You have LOTS of TALENTS in writing poetry.

The poem is powerful and well expressed. There was a time I was really down and perhaps still, but never did I expressed and touched by your poem this way. Nicely done, girl, or lady.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

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