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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-12-01 08:39 PM






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2002-12-01 08:43 PM


Marge

I think you went inside the wistfull mind of this young lady and spoke her words...only made them more lovely.  Hugs!

Betty
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2 posted 2002-12-01 08:48 PM


I really like this Marge.
Love ya,
Betty

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3 posted 2002-12-01 09:35 PM


Lovely poem Marge, but the present can be lovely too.  The future sometimes comes too soon.  Love, Joyce
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4 posted 2002-12-01 09:57 PM


So lovely, Marge! Beautiful presentation!
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5 posted 2002-12-02 02:21 PM


Dear Marge:  Lovely poem and the girl looks like an Irish colleen! Another perfect combination.

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2002-12-02 05:18 PM


Marge, What a beautiful presentation. I can hear her thinking outload as she contemplates the past and searches into tomorrow.

The picture is so thought provoking in itself.

Hugs, Marti


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7 posted 2002-12-02 07:05 PM


Wow Marge! I love the way you did this. This is beautiful.
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8 posted 2002-12-02 07:10 PM


Marge now you just knew I would love this!  Very well done dear.
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9 posted 2002-12-03 01:27 PM



Marge~
Can I just say how nice it is to have time to read you again?
I'm loving this one...no surprise.  It's beautiful.
Love ya,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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10 posted 2002-12-04 01:50 PM


Lately I have been feeliong lost and have lost focus in my work, whereas in the past I have always felt sure of what I wanted in life. Thank you for this poem and helping me return to the path, dx
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