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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-11-20 04:38 PM


//the following is exempt from a bio on one of my poetry page.

I'm an Infant Bird (c) Nov. 20, 2002

I was a bird,
flied from Hong Kong,
across the ocean,
to this foregin land.
My heart is fragile as apple skin,
of the infant bird,
yet of the younker skin,
come feather of...parents'love.

Side Note: I'm a person who have emotional disputes, but with God's and parents' love, I'm set free...

Thank you Dad...
For all the detail things
That you care...and do.

Thank you Mom...
For your big heart
All fill with love
That pour endlessly...to our family.

Love,
Vivian So

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-11-20 07:51 PM


I love your camparison of a little bird to yourself.  I am sure it is apt.  Joyce
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2002-11-20 08:24 PM


Eliza~
Very insightful ... and how ready-for-flight you are~
Fly little bird ... fly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2002-11-21 12:02 PM


Eliza:  May you always have the love and support of your family!

Betty Lou Hebert

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