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pegasus111
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0 posted 2002-11-14 07:58 AM



Beyond the gently rolling sea
beyond the stars that shine at night
there is someone who calls to me
a soothing sound in gentle flight

across the vast and troubled space
she whispers thoughts of peace and ease
of times that held such charm and grace
and tender love my heart to please

I see that face in my minds eye
so real in neural vision clear
my heart in truth cannot deny
the ache to feel you now right here

Someday somehow, I know not where
we’ll meet again of this I’m sure
and then to you my love I swear
forevermore it will endure

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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midnightblues
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1 posted 2002-11-14 08:34 AM


"message in a bottle"s used to intrigue me, this is truly a unique touch to that special feeling of romance and anticipation!

Smiles
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Romy
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2 posted 2002-11-14 09:28 AM


If I could ever hope to write my very best, it would be just like this!  I love to read your beautiful poetry.
Thanks for sharing,
Romy

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3 posted 2002-11-14 11:05 AM


A truly beautiful love poem.  The title fooled me.  I was afraid you had turned to drink.  Love,  Joyce
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4 posted 2002-11-14 11:34 AM


This is a beautiful poem of love and hope.
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5 posted 2002-11-14 12:35 PM


Pegasus~
May your bottle always contain hope ...
adrift on the sea of memories-in-the-making~

This is just real purty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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BloomingRose
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6 posted 2002-11-14 12:52 PM


Gentle romantic message in a bottle.
Hope prevails where there is love!

Deb

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7 posted 2002-11-14 06:38 PM


pegasus111:  This poem has a classic beauty to it.  A wonderful read!

Betty Lou Hebert

Denise
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8 posted 2002-11-14 07:09 PM


Breathtakingly beautiful, Pagasus! Lovely!
pegasus111
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9 posted 2002-11-15 03:26 AM


thank you my friends for your kind comments. where would we be without hope? in a dark and lifeless place I fear.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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