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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-11-12 09:47 AM






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marsha
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1 posted 2002-11-12 01:00 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my heart and speaker of my soul, when your words fall on my soul I am moved and spellbound. There is within your writing what can only be described of as pure magic, anyone can write, but not everyone has the power to sway the audience. Perhaps I should amend that there are writers who can tap into the emotions of their readers, but there are fewer who can do it not just once, not just on the occasional poem but over and over and over again. YOU can and you do, you take the written word and transform it, you make it alive, and rooted in the reality of the world. I thank you always, for sharing the wonder, and showing me the colours that flow through my soul, you paint the rainbow darling heart and you do it with grace and abundant skill.

As for this utterly utterly beautiful poem I say I love it absolutely, it is utterly splendiferous. Truly one that is a keeper darling heart, and so I shall place it with the rest of your sparkling gems in my heart’s treasure chest.


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Street Heart
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2 posted 2002-11-12 03:03 PM


Oh my! Marge,I don't know if I can top the splendiferous comment above!Yipes !I can only reiterate.This,truly,is one of my favorites of yours.Offerings such as this eloquent profession of Love for the night sky immediately enter my "vault".

Geoffrey
If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

[This message has been edited by Street Heart (11-12-2002 03:04 PM).]

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-11-12 07:13 PM


lovely Marge, I look for the moon every night although the past 2 have  been in hiding behind the rain clouds...

I love these foreverly postcard poems
hugs
M

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
4 posted 2002-11-12 07:44 PM


Marge, no one writes about the moon the way you do, dear lady. Unfortunately, it has been raining here since last Friday and I have not been able to see LaLuna.

Thank you for reminding me what she looks like, enhanced only by your phenominal words.

Huggles, Marti

juliet_2u
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5 posted 2002-11-12 08:27 PM


Dear wonderful Marge, you never cease to amaze me. This like all the rest is beautiful. I've missed yaaaaaaa.
Hugs,
Juls

Titia Geertman
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6 posted 2002-11-12 08:44 PM



Oh, I could use a moon right now, I'm pooped and worn out.

It's far too late for me, but as you know....I love moons, especially yours

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
7 posted 2002-11-12 10:01 PM


Lovely...I can't compete with above replies so won't even attempt! I was looking at the half-full moon earlier tonight, so this one really touched me and brought the memory of its beauty back. Super poem, great read, thanx! Keep em coming and we'll keep on reading!!!!
Luv, Liz xx
PS Did u get my email? Not sure if I have your correct address. lol.

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
8 posted 2002-11-12 10:04 PM


Marge, this is soooo beautiful.
Flutterwings
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9 posted 2002-11-12 11:43 PM


Marge girl, I echo all the above. I believe you were moon-struck and the stars danced in your soul when you put pen to paper. Enough said. I stand and applaud with much admiration. Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~))


BloomingRose
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10 posted 2002-11-13 08:45 AM


Half a thrill of moon in spill...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Once again you've spilled some delightful words upon the blue pages.
Lovely indeed!

Deb

Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 2002-11-13 08:46 AM


I LOve It!
A very lyrical and image filled verse!
It is a treasure for sure
Thank you Margie for this sweet string of poetic phrases. LOvely, Lovely"
Liz

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2002-11-13 10:57 AM


MyLovelyFriends~
It is a wonderful day to be 'magically' surrounded by the circling of such lovely friendships~
Thank you all from the heart of my little bottom~

The moon in capture
spreads such rapture
as to gently persuade the night
to come again in heart of friend
with everflowing light~


*Huglets*
~*MargeOfTheMoonlight*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Betty
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13 posted 2002-11-13 11:16 AM


Oh Marge this is so beautiful. The moon is magical for sure & you bring that magic out like no one else can.
Love,
Betty

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14 posted 2002-11-13 03:44 PM


Dear Marge:  Thanks for this gorgeous poem! I haven't seen the moon for so long.......raining here and cloudy all the time....................that I am basking in the glow of your poetry!

Betty Lou Hebert

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Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2002-11-13 06:28 PM


Gosh .... just how lucky can a poetess get ?
You are ALL THE GREATEST~
Thank you for letting me share my little moon-spill all over your day and
night~

****Just for you ... BettyLou~

If I had an Idaho moon
with teardrops held in place
by the glow of dancing snow
I'd send a trace of glowing face
to my friend in Coeur D'Alene
I'd send the moon full-phasing
to spread such amazing
light across her night
So that Trillium and Ron
could count the stars of far-beyond~


Is it a GREAT DAY TO BE A POET ... or WHAT ??
*Huglets* to ALL~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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16 posted 2002-11-13 07:42 PM


Dear Marge,  I guess a lot of poeple saw this before I did, but I am so glad you saved a portion of your halfness for me.  Love, Joyce
Suetang
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17 posted 2002-11-13 10:16 PM


Hello Marge

I think you already know how much I love your poems about the moon.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

pegasus111
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18 posted 2002-11-14 07:36 AM


oh my!!  shaking my head in wonder here. great piece Marge.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2002-11-14 12:02 PM


Joyce~
Ahhhhhh ... thank you for letting me share a little slice of this gorgeous moon~

SueTang~
Just love knowing that you enjoy them so~

Pegasus~
Awwwww ... thankee my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Trillium
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20 posted 2002-11-14 04:46 PM


Dear Marge:

That moon you sent to Idaho,
Is shining with a silver glow
And though it's raining, I can see
It is rising there for me.
A friendship moon defies the weather.
Something we can share together!!

Thank you so much!  A special gift on my birthday!

Love you
Betty Lou


Denise
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21 posted 2002-11-14 07:01 PM


Beautifully done, Marge! So lovely!
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