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~K
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0 posted 2002-11-11 03:17 AM



Giga Meadows
In Carnations
Shadow vessels

Rampart Blessings

Reign of Terror
Brillant Anger

Eclipse
Retreat
Repeat

Sadness
is
Worse
than
Madness

Backtrack
to the tea party

Chaos

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Denise
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1 posted 2002-11-11 09:33 AM


I can feel the sadness in this. Very good!
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2 posted 2002-11-11 01:22 PM


Was it Alice who was mad or her creator?  Intriguing.  Joyce
~K
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3 posted 2002-11-11 02:51 PM


Or Maybe Alice & her creator are one & the same...hmmmm...good questions one & all!

Thanks for posting to my crazy poem!!!!

Street Heart
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4 posted 2002-11-11 05:11 PM


How I enjoy a good cryptic kick! I Love reading something that is different and thought provoking...makes me want to dig between the lines!Enjoyed this.

Peace,Geoffrey

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5 posted 2002-11-12 08:35 AM


Hello K! Thanks so much for taking an interest in my poetical ravings.I was just returning the favor in kind by looking up your posts. I don't have the time to reply to all of them, but from what I have seen you seem to have an exceptional talent of your own. I'm enjoying your work immensly. I'll try to get back on here and read more of it very soon. Oh yeah, in case I didn't say it before...welcome to PIP!!
Tammy

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6 posted 2002-11-12 10:41 AM


LOL, I've often thought about backtracking to that teaparty.
But then I'd just dig myself in too deep and probably get lost.

~K
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7 posted 2002-11-13 01:03 PM


Thanks for reading & posting!!! I will keep a look out for your poetry! (as soon as the tea partys over!)
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