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Romy
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

0 posted 2002-11-10 07:58 PM

Honey dew you hear me?

I think you’re berry sweet,

Olive your radish hair

and your  dandy-lion feet.

My steamy artichokes,

each time our tulips touch

my blood beets red hot peppers

because you mean so much.

I know I’m just a string bean,

we cantaloupe it’s true,

but if you carrot all for me,

peas show me that you do.

Tell me I look peachy,

in my lemon colored clothes

and plant a little kiss atop

my lovely turnip nose.

Then lettuce vow that someday,

our marriage we’ll declare,

orange glad you met me?

we’re such a perfect pear!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2002-11-10 08:40 PM

Very creative, Romy! What a delight to read!

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2002-11-10 10:39 PM

Romy: This is so much fun to read. I also write "funnies" like this but seldom have the nerve to let anyone read them. You are much braver (and more talented) than I!

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2002-11-11 12:48 PM

I enjoyed this clever little ditty. Joyce

Street Heart
Member

since 2002-09-05

Posts 349
Pennsylvania,USA

4 posted 2002-11-12 05:57 PM

WoW!That was so imaginative!Really liked this alot.Makes me hungry,actually.Gotta go make dinner.Thanks!

One for my "vaults"

Peace,Geoffrey

If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

5 posted 2002-11-12 10:06 PM

Great fun!! Thanx for a good laugh!
Luv, Liz xx

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2002-11-12 10:58 PM

This is a very clever little poem. I love it.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

7 posted 2002-11-13 09:48 PM

Very creative! Enjoyed.

Deb

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

8 posted 2002-11-13 09:52 PM

I forgot to say...
It was a berry good poem

Deb

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

9 posted 2002-11-14 07:38 AM

Romy, you cutie, I love this ( so does de cagman ) ...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

10 posted 2002-11-14 08:52 AM

Hey Romy I relished your humour like a piece of much sought-after candy! Oh I needed a break from my stress and all that and you did it! This is truly amazing, you're great!

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2002-11-14 12:30 PM

Romy~

I berryly got into it
before I before I realized
I'd been taken in by the garden produce
before my versing eyes~

Soooooo cute~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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