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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-11-08 12:52 PM






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ESP
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1 posted 2002-11-08 01:24 PM


Wonderful. That is all I can say in response to this piece. Luv, Liz.
Betty
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2 posted 2002-11-08 02:03 PM


This is beautiful.
Love,
Betty

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3 posted 2002-11-08 02:26 PM


Margie, May I keep it?  It's a and I think one of my very favorites.  Hugggsss
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4 posted 2002-11-08 03:39 PM


Oh Marge, this is sooooo beautiful.
BloomingRose
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5 posted 2002-11-08 03:55 PM


Oh my Margie girl, this is a tear jerker. You have quite a way with words!

Deb

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2002-11-08 03:56 PM


Oh, I thank you all sooooo much~

I am so pleased with this piece~

I awoke in the night ... leaned against the window and as my breath left a mist, it all came to me~

I just couldn't wait to get up this morning and find the perfect graphic to go with the thoughts~  I am just tickled to pieces that you like it too~

LittleLizzie~
I can't begin to tell you how wonderful it was to see your reply waiting for me on this~
I have soooooooo missed you and thank the Good Lord that you have come my way again~
I love you !

Betty~
Thank you so much, love~

GentleSpirit~
Just knowing you want to KEEP it makes me a happy poetess !!
Bless you my friend~

SweetSuzieQ~
Thank you dear lady~
I'm gonna get that e-mail answered !
Honest Injun !

BloomingRose~
Simultaneous replies in flight we were~
Thank you pretty gal ... I'm always pleased to know you are out there~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (11-08-2002 03:58 PM).]

smitty-j
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7 posted 2002-11-08 04:03 PM


From such a simple thing that we've all done, you've created something so lovely. Very melancholy and moving...loved it.
Julie

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8 posted 2002-11-08 04:05 PM


This is a masterpiece, Marge! Very well done!
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9 posted 2002-11-08 05:08 PM


Marge,
A lovely write, enjoyed.

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10 posted 2002-11-08 05:38 PM


Again,Marge,this is beautiful...and one that I very much relate to.If this is a testimony of truth,I commiserate.If Love is True,it never dies...and the one you love is always there within.

Geoffrey

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11 posted 2002-11-08 06:23 PM


Marge-sis

Very touched by this one.

Marsha
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12 posted 2002-11-08 07:47 PM


Margie girl darling heart, yet again this is perfect, you know I love this utterly utterly, as always the flow of line is exquisite it really is.  This really is an excellent piece from you darling heart I love it utterly utterly, This is so truly you wonderful. This hangs in the air like a note in a aria from Les Miserables, truly exquisite, as I said NO ONE does it like you.

Somewhere in time there waits a sigh
Waiting softly for its last goodbye
The heart that sits and watches silently
Wishes for a vision with some clarity
But while heart’s memory lingers on
There’s no chance of hearing love’s sweet song
The memory keeps you locked inside
And your heart seeks a place to hide
Open your soul let the memory fade
And you’ll walk in sunshine not in shade


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

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13 posted 2002-11-08 11:06 PM


Dear Marge:  You certainly found the perfect graphic to go with your marvelous poem!

Betty Lou Hebert

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14 posted 2002-11-09 03:08 AM


Hello Marge

Your words were so sad yet filled with so much beauty.  I felt as if I was part of the picture.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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15 posted 2002-11-09 09:22 AM


Marge, it would be extremely difficult for me to pick a favorite piece that you have written. But girlfriend, IF I had to choose, this would be the one.

The words, the graphic ~~ just incredible.

Loves to you, Marti

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for I have learned how to sail my
SHIP."              Louisa May Alcott

(I'm not changing this for anyone!)

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16 posted 2002-11-09 10:34 AM


oh Marge, this is so sooo beautiful penned, thank you for sharing dear friend.

(((hugs)))
Charisma

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17 posted 2002-11-09 11:22 AM


The words are written with the pen, but the love comes from within.

Thanks,
Melton

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18 posted 2002-11-11 12:17 PM


Exquisite.  Joyce
Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2002-11-11 06:37 PM


Julie~
I appreciate the read and reply~
It was just a 'moment-in-time' that poets luck into~

Denise~
Awwwww ... thanks lady~

Seymour~
I so appreciate you~

StreetHeart~
I'm sure we've all had those 'moments' when it might have been a 'happening' ... happily for me ... it was perhaps written on windows of a distant past~
Thank you so much for your kind and considerate comments~

Martie~
Hon ... I would imagine that at one time or another we have both breathed a *sigh* upon the windowpane ... (or pain)~
*Hugs*

MarshaLove~
Not only do you leave a beautiful reply ...
but a piece of your poetic heart too~
Thank you dear girl~

BettyLou~
Thank you for thinking so ....
I adore sharing with you~

SueTang~
It's a real compliment when a poet learns she may have pulled the reader into the picture~
Thank you so much for letting me know~

MartiGal~
I would always hope that my 'next' one would be your 'favorite'~
You are just a sweetheart~

Charisma~
I am always pleased to see you've flipped a page of me~
Thank you dear lady~

Melton~
Thanks so much for your kind thoughts~

Joyce~
Great appreciation from this little corner of the world for YOU~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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20 posted 2002-11-15 01:08 AM



Marge~
This is absolutely gorgeous and such a heart-tugger of a write.
This reached in and grabbed and just wouldn't let go.
Perfectly penned and presented, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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21 posted 2002-11-15 01:58 PM


Dear, dear Marge, this is so mesmeric but yet leaves me feeling a little wistful...and I must say its such a surreal feeling! This is one of a kind Marge, I love it~

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2002-11-15 03:51 PM


VickyMyLilBuddy~
Just seeing the lovely comments you've left all over my ink has given me that 'you-know' feeling~
Me missum our all-nighters soooooo much~

Thank you sweetie ... you're still #1 !

MidnightBlues~
You leave the loveliest replies ... I am so very pleased that you enjoy my 'word-doodles' that much~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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