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junemac
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0 posted 2003-10-11 05:34 PM




Dark sultry nights
Loves heady potion
Sweet need to Consume
Together in motion

Agony of want
Burning like fire
Needing and pleading
To satisfy desire

Intense Melting moment
Starburstofpleasure
Sated souls entwine
gently at their leisure

Sweet tender caress
Passions afterglow
Holding loves strength
Never letting go



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1 posted 2003-10-11 05:35 PM


Beautifully descriptive.  Well done.  Joyce
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2 posted 2003-10-11 05:40 PM




(smiles) Oh June, this is soooooooo beautiful and adorable, sweet friend, I wish for this sunbeam of love to always glisten in your heart with smiles! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

paraboxer
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3 posted 2003-10-11 05:41 PM


How romantic, though regretablly I have yet to experience that sensation. Even though I haven't, your work helped me know what it will feel like when I one day find love...
SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-10-11 10:58 PM


Awwww, never letting go...that's sweet!
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (10-11-2003 10:59 PM).]

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5 posted 2003-10-23 04:19 AM


I felt it
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