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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2002-11-05 05:40 PM


The breath of Winter
freezing the Rose of Summer
Hope the breath of Spring

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

© Copyright 2002 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
NewEnglandlazurlu
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1 posted 2002-11-05 07:50 PM


ellie, this is really spectacular. I am sooo impressed.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

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2 posted 2002-11-05 09:29 PM


Ellie~
You always leave us with such a breath of freshness in your write~
This is sooooooo promising~
Thank you for being here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
3 posted 2002-11-27 07:32 AM


Ellie, This is a beautiful Haiku, with Winter on our doorsteps the hope of Spring is on my mind. I'll count the days till it gets here. Thanks for sharing your talent here with us.
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4 posted 2002-11-27 10:01 PM


Lovely haiku.  Nice to see you back again.  Joyce
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