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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-11-02 01:59 PM


Little Bird, This is a Test

Nov 1, 2002

Falling on the steps-
After my bod-y
Have pour all life ou-t

Nights after trying-
I hear familiar vo-ices
Call-ing for live-liness

But the fact is I-
I'm tired of trials
It takes pa-tience
To start all o-ver, a-gain...

Little b-ird,
It’s time
To put
Our theory
Into test a-gain…
That-
Life is all about adjust-ment
(Of attitude!)
If we change
The pattern of our a-pproach…
Then anything can be re-feshing.

And there will have patience.


Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (11-04-2002 05:04 PM).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-11-02 05:32 PM


There is more than a kernel of truth in this Eliza.  What did the little bird answer?  Love, Joyce
Midnitesun
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2 posted 2002-11-02 10:20 PM


Yes, it takes time and patience to adjust, to change your patterns of approach to understanding the dynamics of the cosmos and this earthly realm. Are you perhaps referring to moving away from negative and towards positive thoughts?

Life is all about adjust-ment
(Of attitude!)
If we change
The pattern of my a-pproach…
Then anything can be re-feshing.

And there will have patience.

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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3 posted 2002-11-04 01:31 PM


you are right. I was thinking movoing from neg to positive

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

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