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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-10-31 06:29 PM


When sunset comes early,
I know a year has slipped by.
One year older, but wiser,
With the same health and wealth,
I'm blessed with a thanksgiving heart.
I love the morning sky,
How the hue change in various seasons.
When the dawn is early,
The sky is painted with autumn's color.
When the dawn is late,
The stars are brightly shining.
And I never run into loneliness,
For I have God with me,
Who have given me abundance,
Who gave me a loving family.
Family is a small unit,
But it can include a lots of people.
Family such as church,
Is testimony of God.
I was hardworking,
Now I get my reward,
But I knew this all along,
And I know a better reward,
Is waiting for me...
Rejoice for each testimony in my life.

//which one is more suitable? "Special Guest" or this one. I think "Special Guest", what do you think?

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2002-11-01 11:50 AM


This is sweet too, but I agree with you, the other is more appropriate, I think!
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2 posted 2002-11-01 03:54 PM


I hope the years don't change you too much.  You're just right the way you are.  Love, Joyce
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3 posted 2002-11-01 06:26 PM


Eliza:  I especially liked Special Guest for your friends, although this is a really lovely poem too.  I think the other one is more appropriate for them. Enjoyed reading both of them!

Betty Lou Hebert

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