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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-10-31 06:15 PM


(c) Oct 30, 2002

A change of cold air
Is the best seasons' transformation indicator.
What left behind are bright colors of autumn leaves
Vividly painted in our memories.
November signals beginning of winter;
The season for unique visitors
Stir creativity to cast away its loneliness.
Winter isn't so bad with special guest, such as snowflakes,
For snowflakes are inimitable,
Just like the two of you,
Bringing sense of specialty to those who come across your path.

//Is this appropiate for a birthday card for a couple of 90 years old who have contribe a lot to community?

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2002-11-01 11:45 AM


Very lovely! Yes, I think it's most appropriate!
Street Heart
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2 posted 2002-11-01 02:03 PM


Very beautiful and thought provoking.I too think it's very appropriate.Well written.

Peace,Geoff

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2002-11-01 03:55 PM


Lovey thoughts.  Joyce
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4 posted 2002-11-01 04:53 PM


HI! I've missed your writings, Eliza.
Yes, this is beautiful, and would be a wonderful gift. Thank you for sharing this tender loving poem. Kacy

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5 posted 2002-11-01 04:55 PM


"Winter isn't so bad with special guest, such as snowflakes,
For snowflakes are inimitable,
Just like the two of you,
Bringing sense of specialty to those who come across your path."

Came back to say, this is outstanding, and to put this into my favorites library!

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6 posted 2002-11-01 06:22 PM


Eliza:  I think this would make a lovely card for your older friends.  I'm sure they'll be touched and pleased!

Betty Lou Hebert

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