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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Ordinary (c) Oct 28, 2002 When snowflakes dawn on warm air, A breath of loneliness is felt. Tip-toe to the bench side, Snowflakes observe the cruddies. Long to find commons, But all along she knows she's different. Come along the wind breeze, Solace her with winter sentiment. Winter is special for unique visitors, Such as snowflakes. May the world become a horizon, The snowflakes and winter Always accompanies each other. Eliza Simmons |
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~K Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 104 |
very nice...really liked "winter is special for unique visitors"  [This message has been edited by ~K (10-29-2002 06:10 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is so good Eliza. Great job. I loved it. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: Lovely winter images in this one! I enjoyed it very much. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Very beautiful wording and thoughts.You write well.Very visual and intimate.Thank you for sharing this.Beautiful! Geoffrey |
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