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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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0 posted 2002-10-24 08:37 PM


//this poem is for all who have kindly accept me as a family here and often read my poems and give replies. This poem is for everybody.

One day at breakfest,
You found a girl with biscuit face and biscuit heart.
You picked up all scrap papers
From the floor written by the child
To read and feel for the girl.
Nicely, you offered a hand to her shoulder;
The tiny girl looked up with hands reaching yours.
"Here is a biscuit my Mom made," the girl said.
There are lots of things she has not learnt
But still
She has yet lots of years to come.
"And I know I am safe here and eat biscuit with you," says the girl.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2002-10-24 10:13 PM


Oh thank you dear Eliza for the poem.  Now I am going to put that one in my library.  Joyce
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Member Patricius
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Idaho, USA
2 posted 2002-10-24 10:22 PM


Eliza:  A lovely poem with such sweet sentiment! We, here at PIP are lucky to have you posting with us.  Your poetry is always so refreshing and sincere.

Betty Lou Hebert

CHILI
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since 2002-09-08
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3 posted 2002-10-25 07:29 PM


Eliza, thank you, this is a sweet piece of work.  
A. L. Becker
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since 2002-09-06
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4 posted 2002-10-26 09:14 PM


dear Eliza, i feel the same way!!!
annie!

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

Street Heart
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5 posted 2002-11-01 02:38 PM


That is really sweet,Eliza!Your writtings show your Heart.

Peace,Geoff

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