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CHILI
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0 posted 2002-10-24 03:43 PM



The sweet aroma that does surround,
Essences of the emotional heart,
Deeply permeates and does abound,
Where ever love might start.

It's scent left lingering on the air,
As emotions blossom then bloom
Odors arise fragrant and fair,
From amid the stench of heartache and gloom.

Raging storms of unleashed passions,
Leave aromatic feelings broken and bent.
A garden of love, now of ashes.
Left behind, are memories heady scent.


© Copyright 2002 CHILI - All Rights Reserved
storyteller.of.poets
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1 posted 2002-10-24 03:54 PM


Nice poem, hope to see more like it

CHILI
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2 posted 2002-10-24 04:08 PM


storyteller.of.poets, thank you for taking the time to read and for the compliment.



aries_luv_ppl
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3 posted 2002-10-24 06:09 PM


I'm putting this to my library

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

CHILI
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4 posted 2002-10-24 07:01 PM


aries_luv_ppl, thank you for taking the time to read and for the compliment.  I don't think I have ever  been put in anyone's library before, I am honored.  
Brenda Hall
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5 posted 2002-10-24 08:33 PM


Great Poem Chili. Keep up the good work!
~GBU~

Brneda Hall

CHILI
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6 posted 2002-10-24 08:58 PM


Brenda, thank you for taking the time to read and for the nice compliment.  
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7 posted 2002-10-24 10:11 PM


Chili this is lovely writing.  I am sure the scent of love linger on even though the embers have burned themselves out.  Joyce
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8 posted 2002-10-24 10:29 PM


CHILI: I enjoyed this poem so much.  It's really lovely and profound!

Betty Lou Hebert

CHILI
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9 posted 2002-10-24 11:39 PM


Joyce, thank you for taking the time to read and for the nice compliment. What the heart has once held and loved it holds forever.

CHILI
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10 posted 2002-10-24 11:41 PM


Trillium, thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I am glad you liked this piece, it's different from most of the things I write.  
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