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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

0 posted 2002-10-21 11:30 PM

With each passing moment another leaf drops from the tree
Sudden breezes activate a waterfall of golden leaves
That ride the wind unto unknown destinations
Will winter come quickly?
Or will her coming, be inconspicuous and unnoticed
When old man winter comes knocking
Will Autumn slam the door to season past
And heave us straight forward into a frigid winter?

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

1 posted 2002-10-22 06:13 AM

So lovely is your poetry! I would love to see winter forget to come and Spring come next month....oh well, doesn't hurt to dream! Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2002-10-22 12:13 PM

To everything its season. This is lovely. Joyce

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2002-10-22 01:22 PM

I certainly hope it slams the door and brings on the winter..lol...I shouldn't hope for such here in Gulfport though.

Lady, your nature and season poetry is always wonderous. I hope you're well wherever you are.

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-10-22 01:58 PM

OhSongBird~
This is soooooooo lovely~
I wish you 'fair-sailing' right into Springtime~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

5 posted 2002-10-25 04:13 PM

"With each passing moment another leaf drops from the tree
Sudden breezes activate a waterfall of golden leaves
That ride the wind unto unknown destinations"

These lines above are so lovely!

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

CHILI
Member

since 2002-09-08

Posts 244

6 posted 2002-10-25 07:22 PM

I have to agree, the first three lines of this piece are great. I enjoyed.

A. L. Becker
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since 2002-09-06

Posts 167
San Francisco, California

7 posted 2002-10-26 08:42 PM

dear Songbird,
may old man winter shut the door nicely this year, and may his visit be brief!

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

Street Heart
Member

since 2002-09-05

Posts 349
Pennsylvania,USA

8 posted 2002-11-01 03:00 PM

"Sudden breezes activate a waterfall of golden leaves"-what a beautiful line.Very nice!

Peace,Geoffrey

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