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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-10-21 07:11 PM

When the autumn leaf
Blowed by the warm running air,
Fell on your hair,
You said you loved me...and always.
I laughted, knowing the wrong start.

We were just fragile shoots
Under the changable wind.
Moody swing, we were in our youth.
On premature weather, I found we had too many difference:
We take different paths.

And when the spring came,
You nodded to my wisdom,
That the world is a place
Of flowers and smiles.
Nothing surprised, I know you were a visitor.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2002-10-22 12:16 PM

Truly a sweet poem full of wisdome in your own inimitable style. I love your pieces, Eliza. Joyce

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-10-22 02:00 PM

Eliza~
My goodness !!!! This is just gorgeous !
How beautiful your thoughts were to read~
MORE of this !!!!
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-11-30 04:58 PM

Vivian~
What a lovely write this is.
I truly enjoyed reading every word.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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