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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Vessels Of Keep ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Because Twilight whispers In hushed tones of the night Always I will think of you then Pausing in whatever my mood may be Reflecting on the way we were Before the sun went down On yesterday ~Because With tomorrow Comes a new chance to say Just how much I am loving you Hoping you stand still long enough to hear The caressing beat of my heart Giving to you complete Freedom to love ~Because Our love has found Commitment totally Gathering from break-of-dawning Lasting through until softest twi-of-night The pure essence of our beings Poured into each others Vessels of keep ~Because ~I'm just going to call this one a little 'Tri-Rictameter'~ ~Because, I can~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
very pretty to read and i love the way it looks on the screen |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, I believe you.  Enjoyed. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Truly a beautiful poem of love!! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, I love your try at a Tri Rictametre and I especially love these lines "Hoping you stand still long enough to hear The caressing beat of my heart" Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Sweet and beautiful. Joyce |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Absolutely beautiful. Love ya, Betty |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: A soul stirring love poem in a beautiful format! The ultimate write! Betty Lou Hebert |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
masterful love poetry..bravo!! the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marge Stunning words of love and devotion....simply beautiful. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~Funny Quickly this piece Became a favorite Of all the pieces I have done Reminding me that sometimes in my think There resides a thought worth inking Inside the heart of me No surprises Funny~ Thank you all so very much~ It's a great day to be a poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge~ Do you KNOW how much I LOVE this one?! Well, I do!  Of course I love the beautiful words, but you also know how much I LOVE rictameters. Well, guess what! I'm sitting here thinking, "If she can do it..."..LOL I just love that you thought of this 'Tri-Rictameter'. My next challenge...a 'Quad-Rictameter'..LOL. LOVE this, my buddy. Love and hugs,  ~TrickyVicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Only you, friend Could fashion a reply To challenge me even further Than I have ever gone before this time Creating the essence of rhyme In 'Vicky-tameter' Yes, only you Vicky~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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