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A. L. Becker
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0 posted 2002-10-21 02:15 AM


Behold! For a Giant yet walks the earth
With shoulders of rock, striding forth he wields
Thirty-two ounce, thirty-four inch of girth
Maple Excalibur, from which he deals
Four hundred foot jacks, right side of the plate
Six hundred home runs, five hundred base steals
Never swings early, nor ever swings late
Inside the box hit, outside the box wait
He cares not for me, and cares not for you
Cares not a whit for the bat when he’s through
And straightening up, and seeing the view
Watches the ball fly until it’s a dot
And then, only then, begins he his trot
Don’t say to him “bring it” –  it will be brought



"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot


[This message has been edited by A. L. Becker (10-21-2002 07:30 PM).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-10-21 03:45 PM


A.L.Becker~
This is VERY, VERY GOOD !

As one who is being 'forced' to watch the World Series to keep harmony in the household ... I have seen this 'GIANT' ... and he is mighty~

However .....
Me ?  I'm just rooting for those little winged fella's

I think you should find a place to send this to your GIANT !

Greatly enjoyed the read ...
meet you at the Concession Stand !
Winner buys !!!
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

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A. L. Becker
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2 posted 2002-10-21 04:56 PM


Dear Marge,  
Thank you for your nice comments.  I too am rooting for the 'Gels.  Being an old Dodger fan, there's no way i can root for the hated ones, even though I live in SF.  But, I was inspired to write this sonnet because I can't help feeling that I am witnessing sports history everytime I see Bonds step up to the plate.

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2002-10-21 05:57 PM


Beautifully written! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-11-01 09:41 PM


Annie~
I plumb forgot to come back here and GLOAT !

Glad you and I were rooting for the same team~

It was a great series ... and I got to gloat at home so it was worth the time spent watching~ (almost)

Meet ya' at the Pub ... seems we'll both get to buy !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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pegasus111
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5 posted 2002-11-02 07:55 AM


this is an excellent piece...Bonds seems to get better with age. I saw Williams in his prime. They are cut from the same cloth.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



A. L. Becker
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6 posted 2002-11-02 09:29 PM


Yay Gels!  Marge, i will certainly buy the first round.  Peg, i wish i could have seen the splendid splinter play, he was a great american as well as a great ball player!
Annie!

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

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