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A. L. Becker
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0 posted 2002-10-20 02:28 PM


Vanilla Touch

passions unraveled, unloaded
a woman lies, frenetic
with silky auburn blush
and softest blue eyes

vanilla touch of
gliding hands
over his chest
changing love
into maddest desire


"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

[This message has been edited by A. L. Becker (10-21-2002 05:25 PM).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-10-20 06:42 PM


A.L.Becker~
This is too pretty a piece to remain 'Untitled'~

How's about your own line -
Vanilla Touch ?
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2002-10-20 10:38 PM


Perfect words for a perfect title.  Marge knows.  Joyce
A. L. Becker
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3 posted 2002-10-21 05:27 PM


dear ones,
what a wonderful suggestion, which, as you can see, has been implemented!
Annie!

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2002-10-21 06:06 PM


This is delicious, Annie......Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

vlraynes
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5 posted 2002-11-30 04:56 PM



A.L.Becker~
This is such a lovely write and the perfect title too.
Wonderfully penned.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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