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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-10-17 06:39 PM





*Tanka is the 'form' of the month in the Poetry Workshop Forum*
~They are really so much fun to write~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Martie
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1 posted 2002-10-17 06:44 PM


Marge--This is so beautiful!  
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2002-10-17 06:46 PM


Oh .... I forgot to mention ....
I took a little 'poetic license' with the form .... did it in 5-7-5-7-5 format instead of the standard 5-7-5-7-7 !

But ... I'm a poet ... I can do that occasionally~

LOL !  Honest Injun ...~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-10-17 06:56 PM


Marge,
You are a wonder.

Betty
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4 posted 2002-10-17 07:37 PM


This is beautiful Marge
Love ya,
Betty              

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5 posted 2002-10-17 08:01 PM


This is so beautiful, Marge!
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6 posted 2002-10-18 11:27 AM


Very beautiful, Marge! Take all the poetic license that you want! No doubt it will be fantastic anyway!
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7 posted 2002-10-18 01:49 PM


Dear Marge:  This is as serene and lovely as the moon herself!

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2002-10-19 03:29 PM


Breathless in Ocala, Marge..lovely, lovely.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-10-20 06:33 PM


Oh, gosh-darn it ...
you guys are just the  G R E A T E S T !
~*Marge*~

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