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wordancer
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0 posted 2002-09-24 04:06 PM


A titan,
one man’s vision,
Mikey’s boy stands
as the dust of time

settles

a cloak on bare shoulders;
the youth waits unwavering
for goliath.

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Denise
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1 posted 2002-09-24 08:25 PM


I like this. Very good!
pegasus111
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2 posted 2002-09-25 07:22 AM


the dancer shines again. my mind is filled with the power of this brief description of the ultimate confrontation.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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3 posted 2002-09-25 05:22 PM


Wonderful.  Joyce
ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2002-09-25 05:50 PM


Courage...and you have said it so well. Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Miah
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5 posted 2002-09-25 05:52 PM


very enjoyable read.  
CHILI
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6 posted 2002-09-26 05:46 PM


Excellent write.  
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