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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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sometimes all the world’s songs do little to lift a broken heart and all the music of life fails to dry the dampness of a sad walk for the garden is wide and the steps far too small and though distances are huge the displacement is nil when all the walks end in circles and the ends are where they began all the foot prints and all the lines marked in golden sand are forced into oblivion by one powerful wind like they never existed sometimes all the happiness seems so unreal like it never could exist |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very interesting Sudhir. Yes sometimes all we can do is wait it out. Joyce |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very good write Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sudhir: Nice poem if a bit sad. Sometimes the wind that blows footprints away leaves you a new beginning. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot my friends...  Regards, Sudhir |
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CHILI Member
since 2002-09-08
Posts 244 |
Sudhir, I found this piece sad and touching. I agree with Joyce, sometimes all we can do is wait. Thanks for sharing. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you so much... CHILI.... regards, sudhir |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
So beautifully written, Sudhir....When i have passed through these times of sadness and loss, "this to shall pass", was a wise and comforting way to think it through..and pass it does! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I enjoyed the read. I hope the walks do find an end. Thanks, Melton |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well expressed, Sudhir! Great writing! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Oh, my friend ... you touch a chord of bitter-sweet depth with this lovely write~ So good to see you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sudhir, this was so well written, but oh so sad. I hope that you aren't really this sad. Thanks for sharing your poetry. Love To All, Ethel |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all my good friends... Hope you are all doing fine these days... Regards, Sudhir |
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