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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2002-09-22 11:44 PM


Goodbye to Summer

I can't believe it's happening!
September month is almost gone.
It is the summer's last hurrah
With cool October coming on.

It's autumn on the calendar,
The days are warm and nights are chilled.
All life around is closing down.
My world is with loud bird calls filled.

So busy gearing for their flight,
They're calling for all of their kin.
The racket makes good sense to them,
To me, it's just a raucous din.

Jack Frost will leave his signs on all.
Without a clinging leaf to share,
Shivering in the winter's wind,
Pitiful trees with branches bare.

If I could hibernate 'til spring
I'd be retiring very soon,
But not until his shift is done;
That big old ball of harvest moon.

By: Joyce 9/22/02



© Copyright 2002 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Miah
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1 posted 2002-09-23 01:13 AM


Joyce,

Fall is my favorite time of year, but we can skip winter and go right back to summer if it was up to me.  Beautiful poem by the way.  Oh well sunny days are almost over.


the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-09-23 11:11 AM


This is a beautiful poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2002-09-23 05:42 PM


Lovely picture of fall, Joyce....but not too soon on old Jack Frost...I hate that morning when I wake to find my garden turned to mush!! Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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4 posted 2002-09-24 01:34 PM


Joyce:  Enjoyed your poem and I agree, we wouldn't want to leave during the full moon.  Too beautiful to miss. (However, I wouldn't mind leaving before the first snow!)

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2002-09-25 07:12 AM


good one Joyce. The moon off the coast of Florida this time of year is a huge orange ball rising from the sea at dusk.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Joyce Johnson
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6 posted 2002-09-25 11:39 AM


Isn't that strange Peg?  It's coming from over the mountains here. Just kidding.  It is so beautiful.  Joyce
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7 posted 2002-09-25 11:37 PM


Noooooo,Joyce...please...I beg you...I don't want to say goodbye to Summer!I know...
I'm in denial.Oh,well,now that I'm done with my tantrum,I will tell you that you wrote beautifully again.Can I make a request?Can your next one be entitled,"Hello,Eternal Warm Sunny Days"?! :0 You will get such a humongous smile from me that you'd be able to
feel it all the way to where you are !

Sincerely,sheepishly,Geoffrey

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8 posted 2002-09-26 01:30 AM


Joyce, this is such a pretty poem. Thanks for sharing.
Joyce Johnson
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9 posted 2002-09-26 02:15 AM


Thanks everyone.  And if I could hang on to those sunny days by saluting them in rhyme, I would do it.  Joyce
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