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Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2002-09-20 10:28 PM

Glimpse of Eden

I think that I have finally found
A place where nature can abound.
No creature fears to show it's face.
There is a stream where otters race
And slide down muddy banks with glee.
Where it is possible to see
Sweet nature spread her varied wares.
The graceful deer and burly bears,
All wander where there's elk and moose
And timber wolves are on the loose,
Along with coyotes, cougar too,
And China pheasants passing through,
Do add a note of colored flair
To all the other birds in air.
High over all, the eagles fly.
Their dark wings spread against the sky.
Here, everything's in harmony
And if you ask where this might be,
Then I will tell you that I find
This glimpse of Eden, in my mind!

Published in Dream Weasver, 1995
Published by Scroll Magazine, 1999

[This message has been edited by Trillium (09-20-2002 10:31 PM).]

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

1 posted 2002-09-20 10:44 PM

Wow I think I just shared that glismp too

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

CHILI
Member

since 2002-09-08

Posts 244

2 posted 2002-09-21 05:25 AM

I enjoyed this alot. Thanks for sharing.

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2002-09-21 05:51 PM

sooo lovely, Betty ..and you say I have a great imagination, well yours is fantastic, dear lady!! Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2002-09-21 05:58 PM

Moon Dust: Thanks and I'm glad you could see what I was wriring about.

Betty Lou Hebert

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2002-09-21 05:59 PM

CHILI: Thanks and appreciate your nice comments.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2002-09-21 06:00 PM

ellie: Thank you very much!

Betty Lou Hebert

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

7 posted 2002-09-21 07:00 PM

What a peaceful and beautiful picture you present to us, as such a wonderful & desirable state--Eden past and hopefully at least in essence Paradise to come!

Thanks for the tranquility,
david

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

8 posted 2002-09-21 11:59 PM

Dear David: Thank you very much for reading and I appreciate your comments.

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

9 posted 2002-09-23 02:39 AM

How did I miss this. So peaceful and lovely. Joyce

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

10 posted 2002-09-23 08:58 AM

I love your Eden and I sat here this morning with my tea visiting with you and this beautiful spot.

Thank you for your vision on this gloomy, rainy New England morning.

Wonderful...hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

11 posted 2002-09-25 07:14 AM

such beauty and grace flowing from your pen. thank you for this lovely picture.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

12 posted 2002-09-25 01:34 PM

pegasus111: Thanks and it's nice to have your comment.

Betty Lou Hebert

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