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CHILI
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0 posted 2002-09-19 06:11 PM


To see the beauty of a sun rise,
As it lights up a cloudless sky,
Is a blessing yet indeed,
To see the day God hath decreed.
Being allowed another day,
We should point to someone the right way.
To an everlasting life,
One that isn't filled with such strife.
So that they too might rejoice,
And have the chance to make their choice.
The choice to ring an angels bell,
Or to the devil their soul to sell.


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Moon Dust
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1 posted 2002-09-19 06:24 PM


awwww its a sweet msg

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Miah
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2 posted 2002-09-19 07:15 PM


Very nice. I enjoyed this.  
CHILI
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3 posted 2002-09-19 11:29 PM


Moon Dust, thank you for reading.


CHILI
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4 posted 2002-09-19 11:32 PM


Miah, thank you for reading. I hope someone hears the message.


pegasus111
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5 posted 2002-09-20 05:14 PM


Lets hope the bell is the item of choice here.  Nice read.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



LadyDracaWolf
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6 posted 2002-09-20 05:57 PM


It reminded me of one of Robert Frost's poems, whose name escapes me now, but it had essentially the same message. You are the master of your own destiny.

Death is not extinguishing the light;
it is putting out the lamp
because the dawn has come.

Rabindranath Tagore
Poet, Philosopher, Nobel Laurea

Harmony
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7 posted 2002-09-20 06:38 PM


I enjoyed this thank you
Irie
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8 posted 2002-09-20 06:43 PM


Amen!

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

CHILI
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9 posted 2002-09-21 01:15 AM


Pegasus111, thank you for taking the time to read and I do hope the bell is the choice.
LadyDracaWolf, thank you for reading and for the nice compliment.
Harmony, thank you for reading, I am glad you enjoyed this.
Irie, thank you for the AMEN.


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