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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Raining... evening of the forest, Flowers seem to be sad, Worrying... the sun... won't be out again. Wind blows... petals... to everywhere, Flowers seem to be lost... in the wind... Wondering how... to gather their hairs again. Raining... evening of the forest, Flowers seem to be sad, Worrying... the overhelm water... would drown them. Wind blows... petals... to everywhere, Flowers seem to be lost... in the wind... Wondering how... to stand still through the night. //I just started college and I have trouble with finance math and accounting. I'm behind in classes. Sigh... Eliza Simmons |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Good luck in your classes and don't spend too much time worrying about the flowers. He is looking after them. Love, Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Eliza: I like your poem! Good luck with school and hope it all gets easier as time goes on. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
They say,"When it rains,it pours".I relate. Cats and dogs?Been there.2-3 years ago,for me,it was elephants and Blue Whales! Done that! All I can say is take one lesson at a time,every moment in its time,and each raindrop and petal with the help of those who care and have wisdom around you will be afixed within their proper place in time. Don't forget to stop and breathe occasionally...hopefully the air is fresh after that rain! Peace,Geoffrey [This message has been edited by Street Heart (09-18-2002 02:41 PM).] |
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CHILI Member
since 2002-09-08
Posts 244 |
I have to say that if you can look at all those numbers and see them as petals of a flower that you have the problem half licked!I like this piece.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ I so enjoy reading your poetry~ Hope you are doing well in school too~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Vivian~ I have to echo Marge...I just love reading your poetry.  Good luck to you in everything. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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