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A. L. Becker
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0 posted 2002-09-06 08:20 PM


friendship psalm

You are the one
Who dreams my dreams
And smiles my smiles
I hear your words
In all my thoughts

You bring me courage
I trust in you
My soul is filled with love
And your friendship warms me
As a soft blanket in the darkness

Your laughter is a soothing breeze
Your voice a warm ocean
A beautiful light that guides me
And watches me
When I need to be strong

Together as friends, we forever shine
Bright as the stars, we dazzle the night
You'll always be with me
As I am with you
We travel as one in each other's sight

Annie :-

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brian madden
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1 posted 2002-09-06 08:37 PM



Your laughter is a soothing breeze
Your voice a warm ocean
A beautiful light that guides me
And watches me
When I need to be strong

a loevly tribute to a loved one.

Battle not with monsters lest ye become a monster, and if you gaze into the abyss, the abyss gazes also into you. - Friedrich W. Nietzsche

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2 posted 2002-09-07 12:10 PM


A. L. Becker:  This is very beautiful!

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2002-09-07 07:01 AM



...as I am with you....

Welcome to Passions!  I believe you are going to enjoy looking around and becoming one with our family of poets and friends....

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inot2B
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4 posted 2002-09-07 07:51 AM


Your poem enhances… a friend in need, is a friend indeed.

Great write. Welcome!

[This message has been edited by inot2B (09-07-2002 07:54 AM).]

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5 posted 2002-09-07 09:08 AM


This is soothing and well constructed. Your quiet passion seeps through in gentle waves to touch the heart of the reader. well done and welcome to passions.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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6 posted 2002-09-07 12:33 PM


A lovely declaration of friendship.  Welcome to this corner.  Joyce
A. L. Becker
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7 posted 2002-09-07 05:59 PM


dear people,
thank you so much for your kind words, being new i can't help but be a little shy.  thank you for making me feel welcome!
Annika:-

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

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8 posted 2002-09-07 06:27 PM


Beautiful, A.L
A wonderful read!

~wranx

(sorry 'bout the Shimmerbird)

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".      

~wranx~

laryalee2
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9 posted 2002-09-07 10:42 PM


Annie, this is absolutely beautiful!
Heartfelt sincerity...lovely, artistic phrasing...
a joy to read!

Lary


Denise
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10 posted 2002-09-08 02:18 PM


This is a beautiful expression, Annika! Welcome to Passions!
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11 posted 2002-09-08 07:38 PM


ALBecker~
Welcome to the friendliest poetry site on the entire Internet !
You will have no reason to remain 'shy' here~

This is a lovely post~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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CHILI
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12 posted 2002-09-08 09:01 PM


This is well written and shows the wisdom of an insight that comes only with experience. I enjoyed it.


JamesMichael
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13 posted 2002-09-10 04:36 AM


Enjoyed Annika...James
Miss T. Eyed
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14 posted 2002-09-18 02:43 AM


This is a beautiful poem, I love it. Welcome to Passions, hope your stay here is delightful.
Harmony
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15 posted 2002-09-19 11:21 AM


A lovely friendship poem, a pleasure to read
thank you
from
Harmony

ellie LeJeune
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16 posted 2002-09-19 06:27 PM


Welcome to Passions! An exquisite poem of true friendship!  Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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17 posted 2002-09-19 06:36 PM


Wow it sure is as the title says

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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