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pegasus111
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0 posted 2002-09-05 08:35 AM



sweet bygone love-
your absence tugs the heartstrings
time has no remorse

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2002-09-05 12:35 PM


Oh, so poignant. This I believe is a "senyru" which is the same format as a haiku, but a haiku is on nature. This was pointed out to me by VAS who has been like an online editor to me! I'd love to read more of these from you!

Linda

pegasus111
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2 posted 2002-09-05 05:25 PM


you are right of course. I am just lazy... Check the archive. I have quite a few already posted.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost


[This message has been edited by pegasus111 (09-05-2002 05:28 PM).]

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