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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2002-08-23 07:40 AM


the content of a scribe
is a produce of intent
often merged with love
bound with passion
mixed with fervour
and delivered with
the sharp yet deft tip
of the feather of life

the intent of the read
is to enjoy the taste
of the fruit’s ripeness
mixed with a pinch
of salted anxiety
and satisfy curiousity
that stems its way out
of the feather of life

and when the author
meets the reader
the moment is one that is
captured by reverence
fed by sincere respect
and flavoured with the spice
which forms the essence
of the feather of life


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-08-23 01:13 PM


Sudhir~

'the feather of life'

I just love the entire concept of this thought~

You are doing some remarkable poeticizing, my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2002-08-23 09:00 PM


And oh when the reader meets the author, that is an experience to savor.  Until the reader and the author meet there is no measuring the worth of his words.  That is why these forums are priceless.Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (08-23-2002 09:01 PM).]

2dalimit
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3 posted 2002-08-24 07:17 AM


Once again, you have so elegantly captured yet another priceless lesson in poetry. Excellent read.

Thanks,
Melton

Romy
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4 posted 2002-08-25 09:31 AM


Nice description of "the essence" of writing.  Theres much more than pen and paper involved!  Thanks for sharing.

[This message has been edited by Romy (08-25-2002 09:32 AM).]

Sudhir Iyer
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5 posted 2002-09-03 07:33 AM


Many thanks to all of you my friends, for coming along and sharing the essence

Regards,
Sudhir

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