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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon 
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The shadows of indifference had crept in unawares stealing the sunshine of our sweet affair. Today is now yesterday our love lives in the past clouds fill the sky we painted our passion could not last. An easy good-bye our hearts will now be free you will love again in a world void of me. WhiteRose |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is sad but at the same time Nice writing. Joyce |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Very sad. I hope if you shed any tears they don't stain your heart... Paul |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
It's sad, and I agree with the two above. Well written  |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
It's too bad that "indifferences" destroy the good times. Your sad poem is written well, especially the last verse. Thanks, Melton |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
White Rose: Well written poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you do the sad ones good too, my friend |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteRose~ 'An easy good-bye' Sometimes it is all about 'letting go' ... It is a nice feeling when you know 'It Was Time'~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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