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Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-07-26 10:26 AM

* takes her hand into his *
* slips the ring off her finger *
* looks into her cold blue eyes *
* will never have her to hold again *
* a stray tear falls down his face *
* her beautiful blue eyes closed forever *
* lips never to speak another word to him *
* hand never to slip into his again *
* to feel the softness of his skin *
* as they lower her down into the cold wet snow *
* he whispers in her ear *
* I will always love you *
* until the end *

Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before-Edgar Allen Poe

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2002-07-26 11:18 AM

Beautiful, it made me sad, but it's lovely.

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

2 posted 2002-07-26 11:33 AM

Thank you so much, I lost someone close to me when I was about five and it was really hard for me,so I wanted to express it through a poem even if that wasn't how it worked.

~*Riley*~

Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before-Edgar Allen Poe

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2002-07-26 01:41 PM

Riley: Very expressive! It's always so difficult to say good-bye to someone we love. Memories are a treasure we can always keep.

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2002-07-26 09:14 PM

This is very well done. I am sorry that you suffered a loss as a child. It must be so hard to understand when you are so young. Love, Joyce

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

5 posted 2002-07-26 10:03 PM

Yea, it was very hard. And well dealing with it was a lot worse, but I got through it.

~*Riley*~

Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before-Edgar Allen Poe

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-09-14 02:03 PM

PatAngel
Member

since 2004-04-05

Posts 451
California

7 posted 2004-11-04 01:33 AM

Riley,

Such a deep heart-felt poem. I too know about loss. It never completely goes away, Thank you for sharing.

Patricia

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

myheart
Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 160
lost in your eyes

8 posted 2004-11-08 09:32 PM

very touching poem.

~myheart~

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

9 posted 2004-11-15 12:09 PM

This sent chills down my spine for various reasons.

You put the emotion into it quite well. Thank you for sharing it.

*hugs*
BWA

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