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Riley
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in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-07-20 06:44 PM



Lined with hope
Joined by pride
This is what
I feel inside

Dance with the wind
Smiles play along
Sway in time
As I sing this song

My body takes over
I am no long there
The wind plays too
As it blows through my hair

This feeling I have never
Felt before, so new
I am dancing now
Dancing with you

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1 posted 2002-07-20 11:32 PM


What a joyful, carefree feel this has.  You have expressed your feelings so well.

Betty Lou Hebert

Riley
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2 posted 2002-07-21 12:01 PM


Thank you so much for your comment. I try my hardest.

~*Riley*~

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3 posted 2002-07-21 10:16 PM


I certainly enjoyed this little dance, Riley.  Thank you.  Joyce
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