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midnightblues
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0 posted 2002-07-02 11:59 AM


For you are a dreamer
Hopelessly sentimental
So who's to say 'let go'
When you can't shake off the memories?
Who's to say 'don't look back'
When the past taunts you?
Who do you turn to
When that someone is unable to accept it?
Where do you find shelter for your weary heart?


For years down the road
One day you breakdown
And you have to face it
That you are sentimental
So the past haunts you
And he can't take it
Who's to say 'let go'
When you already can't?
That he doesn't want to know
But deep down inside he minds
Can you handle it?
Who do you turn to?
How will you soothe your battered soul?


So you lock up your heart
To the outside world
For you are a dreamer
Hopelessly sentimental
Let go and cry
And you recall
All the nostalgy
Times of melancholy
Laughter and tears
Hurt and the fears
And a lost love

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Here's one after so long...hope that you will like it

Michelle


If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

© Copyright 2002 MiCheLLe - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-07-02 01:35 PM


Hi Michelle.  Yes I do like it.  And I relate to it and you said it well.  I see this is also an anniversary for you.  Your first poem 2 years ago yesterday here.  Welcome back.  Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (07-02-2002 01:36 PM).]

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2 posted 2002-07-02 08:36 PM


MidnightBlues~
This is simply wonderful~
Welcome home~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2002-07-02 10:33 PM


Michelle:  I enjoyed your poem and hope you plan on posting regularly!

Betty Lou Hebert

midnightblues
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4 posted 2002-07-03 02:55 AM


Dear Joyce, Marge and Betty:

Thanks gals u r all so sweet, made me feel right at home again! *huGz*
And yes, I do plan to post regularly again  

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

pegasus111
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5 posted 2002-07-03 08:07 AM


I really liked this. welcome back to the corner. You were here before I arrived but I am looking forward to more from you....

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



midnightblues
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6 posted 2002-07-04 01:16 PM


Dear Pegasus,

Thanks for your warm welcome! I feel right at home here

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

shades of paul
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7 posted 2005-12-21 07:48 AM


I like it,good ending ! .........paul

shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness

Annie78
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8 posted 2005-12-21 09:44 AM


me too.....
Annie

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midnightblues
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9 posted 2005-12-21 12:06 PM


Wow it's kind of nostalgic now that I look back at the time when I wrote this.. Kind of going through a transition in my relationship and it's hard..
Hey Paul, thanks for reviving this
Annie dear friend, thanks for reading

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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