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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2002-06-12 07:37 AM



Deepest of Springs Morn
doth close her curtains lushness
Summers Waltz begins


A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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BSC
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1 posted 2002-06-12 08:03 AM


Ahhhh Ellie ~ And I can hear the gentle music playing in the background...such a refreshing little gem... Bonnie
wordancer
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2 posted 2002-06-12 10:03 AM


sweet words indeed...let the riotous dance of summer begin
Anonymity
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3 posted 2002-06-12 10:53 AM


There was a time when I was descent with a waltz looks like I'll need to brush up a tad.  Great Haiku.  Thank you.
laryalee2
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4 posted 2002-06-12 07:33 PM


Perfectly designed, Ellie...a sigh....

Lary

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5 posted 2002-06-13 05:56 PM


ellie:  Beautiful!  We haven't had any spring yet though!  Suppose it will be instant summer when it quite raining.

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2002-06-13 06:39 PM




we went right from fall into summer in Florida this year. I really missed the spring. this is lovely Ellie ( as usual ) The image is delightful.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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7 posted 2002-06-14 04:23 PM


Of course this lovely Ellie.  They always are.  I was gone for several days inside a lovely hotel where outside weather had no meaning.  I understand we had our first truly summer day yesterday and I missed it.  Joyce
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