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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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0 posted 2002-05-30 02:20 PM


Lemon is sour,
but it has its flavour
that make it special.
Scent of lemon
love by everyone,
for we all can relate
to her touch.
Beautiful odor
takes away our stress.
Sour flavour,
somehow it brings comfort,
as though we pity ourselves
and heal by same touch
of others.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

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Muys
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since 2002-04-06
Posts 389
The Netherlands
1 posted 2002-05-30 03:27 PM


       Wine,lemon,hot water et sucre
              hmm hmm hmm
                Hmm Hmm
                  hmm
love Muys

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2002-05-30 06:00 PM


I long so for some lemonaide.
The fresh kind that my mother made.
Joyce

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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3 posted 2002-05-30 06:05 PM


yes, lemonaide is better than water, but than I wish for the tender of milk without any bitterness. Yet life is not all sour or all sweet, apple juice will do fine.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

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