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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2002-05-26 09:47 AM


Soon they will appear.
Elusive,
Gossamer,
Graces of Summer.
Of all God's creatures,
the butterfly,
lifts the soul on wings,
above our human boundaries,
into the ethereal
and beyond,
to hopes horizons,
and the Sunrise
of purity,
to the wonder
of a child's heart!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

© Copyright 2002 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-26 10:33 AM


This is so lovely.  The butterflys of my childhood were so numerous and they are so rare now.  We have destroyed them.  Joyce
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2 posted 2002-05-26 11:32 AM


Ellie~
I 'knew' I would love this before I even opened it ... I was right !

And the butterflies are so numerous on the green lawns of Florida 'springing' ... they are certainly 'grace-on-wing'~

We have butterfly attractor flowers all over the acreage and what joy to see the lovely flitting about daily~

Thank you for these beautiful thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2002-05-26 04:10 PM


ellie: lovely images here and I did enjoy it so much.  We used to have clouds of Monarchs here, but for the last few years, since the loggers cut down their winter habitat in Mexico, we have none. Still get swallowtails and some other types, but not in the great numbers we once did.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2002-05-27 08:36 AM


I love this little piece Ellie. To me,  butterflies represent what is beautiful and graceful in the world. Thank you for sharing this.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



laryalee2
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5 posted 2002-05-28 01:31 PM


Your words themselves float like a butterfly, Ellie!
What a lovely inspiration...

Lary

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6 posted 2002-06-03 01:28 PM


Glad to see you are still writing here, miss all my poet friends here.. still in CA.. but finally got a chance to read some poetry on PIP..  Love to all.. Songbird
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7 posted 2002-06-03 01:55 PM


I'm glad I stopped in here!
I loved it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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8 posted 2002-06-08 10:30 PM


Oh so lovely Ellie ~ written only as you can.  Just sends waves of calm... Bonnie
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9 posted 2002-06-11 06:13 PM


Such grace, an elegant way to describe that beautiful creature the 'Butterfly.'  Enjoyed the poem and look forward to more of your poetry.
wranx
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10 posted 2002-06-13 12:06 PM


Lovely little poem, truly...
but don't you think that they should have been named flutterbys.

How on earth do they migrate for hundreds of miles, since their flight seems so directionless and at the mercy of the winds' whims.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

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