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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA 
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the fog drifts graffiti snakes that seek to entangle while underneath a tightrope of violence spans those trembling pacifist feet while janitors of towers and things on those cracked corners of babel read from a book of instructions to wonder who took off the training wheels from the world’s tricycle “too soon” “too soon” they futilely scream at the back of sanity wobbling down empty canyons as we run with no safety nets from terrorist spies who chant on into the microphone of night IHOPoets, bringing poetic scribes together-- |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
maybe back on the heels for a while but not for long..nice piece dancer.. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Your poem reminds me of the terror I felt that first day. Good job. Joyce |
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laryalee2 Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 96British Columbia, Canada |
A well-constructed picture of confusion, dancer! You bring the message out with startling imagery... "who took off the training wheels from the world’s tricycle" A most unique thought! Lary |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I like this..a lot... you have a way with words..  K |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes! Well done! I love it  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WordDancer~ Very, very nicely done~ *Hugs8 ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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