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leafseranade
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since 2001-07-06
Posts 118
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2002-05-22 10:27 PM


i think i'd like to change
but i'm not sure when
seems like every time i try
i fail again
i think i'd like to open up your wounds
but i'm not sure
if i can stand the sight of blood
especially my own
because
i'll want to feel the same pain

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pegasus111
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ocala, fl, usa
1 posted 2002-05-23 08:33 AM


aren't intimate relationships wonderful?  lol..a very nice read. keep em coming

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-05-23 07:03 PM


Ouch!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

laryalee2
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 96
British Columbia, Canada
3 posted 2002-05-23 07:31 PM


Great introspective poem...
good work!
Lary

Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2002-05-24 11:11 AM


It hurts swo good!
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2002-05-29 09:01 PM


LeafSerenade~
How true that when one we love hurts ... we also bleed~

Very nicely done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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