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CowgirlFreedom17
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since 2002-05-20
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Mississippi

0 posted 2002-05-22 05:31 PM



Time is like an ocean
Bursting with emotion
Leaving pleasant memories
Full of hidden mysteries
Time will keep on going
The ocean will keep blowing
Neither will go back
The way they came before.

Don't hold back the words you really mean.

© Copyright 2002 Melissa Calvert - All Rights Reserved
laryalee2
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 96
British Columbia, Canada
1 posted 2002-05-22 06:01 PM


Lovely phrases and a dynamic conclusion!
Lary

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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
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Idaho, USA
2 posted 2002-05-22 06:43 PM


I like your poem.  Time and oceans both seem to go on forever.

Betty Lou Hebert

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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
3 posted 2002-05-22 08:53 PM


Yes time doesn't go back, but I never thought that way about the ocean until your poem  Very good and welcome here.  Joyce
pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
4 posted 2002-05-23 04:19 PM


welcome to our corner. a good beginning here...looking for more...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
5 posted 2002-05-23 08:05 PM


Short and sweet...nice.

IHOPoets, bringing poetic scribes together--

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