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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon 
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What would be your final wish When death takes your flesh To watch dawn's Champlain Or to be with me again? As a shadow is lost in shadow As a swallow laments its widow A spirit so innocent and bright As it reunites with the light. What auguries do you divine Or 'tis a plot of great design? Leaving me lying in the stars But life now forever with mars. Like you always tell La vie est très belle Without you I dare not claim. Never would it be the same. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. [This message has been edited by jamesjiao (05-20-2002 09:52 AM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I enjoyed your poem. No life is never the same. Hope to see more of your work. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JamesJiao~ A very pleasant read. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
I'm glad you wrote a poem for her James.. Your last stanza is perfect now, it's so haunting.. Sorry I missed this one before!!! Hugs -Lynne |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Oh this is great! Nice read  Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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